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manga sketch 1 by Apocalypse1415

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All righty! :3
I see a lot of potential here! i really like the sketch feeling and i like the ''Haha i'm cool'' pose Hmm Hmm! i really like it! :D so i give you a 4 in vision :D

However everyone use this pose D:
You know what? maybe you can change the inclination of the viewer, I'm sure you know what i mean -w-
but not everybody uses a Cartoon-stylized Manga Style (YES! it exists! :D)
So i give you a 2.5 in originality :D

In technique i guess you can be a lot better <3
Let's see, Your character need a center (Sorry, i don't know the proper name cuz i speak spanish and not english D:<)
Uuuummm... i don't know how to explain it properly, but your character looks like she is flying or levitating or something like that...
she looks off the floor

Practice your human anatomy and stuff! :D
I give you a 3 on Technique <3

On impact i give you a 4, since when i saw the drawing i was like
''Ohhh! loook how cute! <3''

Keep on your fantastic works! :)

Have a Nice day!
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Apocalypse1415 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you. I've been practicing anatomy and etc all night. And yes, it's a cartoon-ish manga, and I've learned it on DragoArt and Manga Academy; as for Manga Academy, not only I could learn to draw, but I bought books on how to speak and understanding Japanese language.

Anyway, thank you very much. I hope you will see more of my drawings some day. :)
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Loftwing Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's okai :D
Self-didactic books are pretty useful <3

You are wlcome :D
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